Do you like my poem?

This has much merit. To me, a poem about war, death and reunion of souls. On the first line did you not mean tear drops? The last line of the stanza seemed choppy as I read, maybe it was me. Second stanza flows well and is quite graphic. The third stanza, second line to me could be made stronger. You also seem to stumble from saying that she will soon be here (obvious one's life is short) but then you digress to telling her that her heart will enrich the land in the meanwhile. Maybe work on transitioning the statement better. Overall, this is a keeper. Compliments to you.